Soft Whispers

Living as we do from day to day

Seems like we never take time to play

Time for ourselves in warm embrace

Or just to sit and admire each others face

Then one night I whisper in your ear

Soft words seldom spoken words you never hear

With wisdom I choose the words that I speak

Because I know you've had a very hard week

But the words seldom spoken

Brings a smile upon your face

Then we hold much tighter in our warm embrace

Reviews

[Annalisa]

Very sweet. I love the line about living day to day and as a result forgetting to play, so very true. Whoever you wrote this for is a lucky woman to have someone who cares enough to take the time to brighten a rotten day. This was very well written, I saw two small errors though and they are below but other than that great work.

"Or just to sit and admire each others face"-----to-----> "Or just to sit and admire each other's face"

"But the word seldom spoken" Earlier in the poem word is plural, you should try and stay consistent, so either it's a word seldom spoken or it i words seldom spoken. either way works.

[shadadakiya]

very beautiful keep them going your a great writer

[J]

Oh this is touching, Michael. How very warm and loving. ;-) You have such a gentle heart.

Very nice!
j