Drown in Holy Water

Drown in Holy Water

Stealing limbs from your coherency

Robbing lies drowning out at sea

Drunk off holy water

Hung and Crucified

I'm an old saying

Proven false

Prophets singing

Don't they mean a lot?

 

Rest my head on thoughts that keep me awake

Curse my soul with sins from the bottom of your lake

I'm gonna sleep and dream of the dead

They're gonna rip out every hair on my head

Stay silent and stay afraid

I'm trying to speak but my crutch won't let me say a thing

 

There's not an issue

I'm nodding off

the melody is haunting

It's playing soft

The guests are dancing out of time

But not a one has pondered why

I Can't help but notice

No one is moving at all

 

Reviews

[AliceWithAButterflySoul]

This piece is sincerely beautiful. Your diction is really just.....indescribable. It's that good. There is nothing I can say. This piece has left me speechless. This is an amazing write! :)

[Dina Rabah]

woow it felt like drowing in the holy water.
your words are indeed strong. Specially when you said '' Curse my soul with sins from the bottom of your lake.''
good work !! ;-)