Fox

I did poetry for English lately and this was a lymric I had to do.

There was a fox,

He lived in a box. 

He quit Dr. Seuss, 

Now he lives in a kabose.

He misses his box.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think. I'm new to it so I want as much criticism as possible.

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

Strong one two punch structure! Very effective!

[Erica Wilkinson]

I really love this! It made me smile! (:

[Seanne Tholltree]

funny cute..

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Haha, I liked it :) Short but very good!

[Ezekiel Silver]

I like it. Simple and with a good rhythm to it.

[hmm]

Cute write, puts a smile on a face.

[xSamilynnx]

nicee!!! short n simple :) good job

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a good poem. I loved the rhythm. It was really good. Thanks for sharing.