She is the one

She is the one,
I love more than life.

She is the one,
I wish I could marry.

She is the one,
I miss every second.

She is the one,
Who holds the key to my heart.

She is the one,
I trust with my life.

She is the one,
that I can call MINE.

She is the one,
That I call,
MY EVERYTHING!

Reviews

[M.E.Lyle]

Ah, I remember those days so many decades ago. You'll miss them once they're gone, so hang on to every minute of them.
You mention you like Led Zep. Listen to Barracuda covered by Sina on you tube. It's not Zep, but it's unbelievably good.
I loved your write. It brought back old memories.

[DaughterNature]

The repetition is nice, but the phrases are mostly either cliched or vague. Work on originality and powerful word imagery!

[Jimmy Seaman]

Thank you ^-^ I will use some of that in the next poem I write.

[Sami Khalil]

A sweet , sensitive poem...Bravo

[Michael G.]

Good write! I liked the way you used "she" and "I" in your thoughts.
Keep writing.

[Steven Cash]

Beautiful job, Trace

Made me think of 'Be the One' by The Fray

[Jimmy Seaman]

Thamks and i havent heard that song

[Steven Cash]

there it is

[Steven Cash]

oops didn't work

just google it

beautiful song

[Jimmy Seaman]

alright

[Katie]

I love your poem! It is so cute, and deffinitly showes how much love and emotion you put into it. The way you ended your poem was awesome. Keep writing. :)

[Chloeldobson]

Cute >.

[☢ZoMbIeS sLaYeR&#..]

very nice! :)

[Perfect Mistake]

Very cute and touching :) She sounds like a great person