Music

I love traditional gospel

In the deepest chamber of my heart

You make love to my soul

No words can describe the flow you create

My beloved, continue to speak to my senses endless

My ears adore melting in your hands

As you massage my spirit with your melody

 

Reviews

[MOON]

Beautiful write, lovely flow.

[Poppie Mira]

Thanks Cathy, wonderful opinion!

[Cathy Wattam]

Lovely poem Poppie. Music has and does continue to inspire us all.

Just one thought - the first line - "In the deepest of my heart" might read better as "In the deep of my heart" or you could add another word after deepest, e.g. "In the deepest chamber of my heart" etc. Just my opinion. Otherwsie, nice work.

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful.