Nature is my metaphor

I feel bitter.

But the flower that’s already so bright

And deeply coloured

And has its leaves reaching above its petal

Has never screamed and wept and sniffled

Or yanked its heart away from the soil

because it hasn’t received the drops of water that could nourish

 Its lungs and state of mind

And because nature is a metaphor

 for the human life

I hope that I could be like the flower

And bear the day where

There is no inspiration to write

Author's Note

the poem sounds random and childish and too emotional but so am I

Reviews

[TheHubbleNation]

This is really nice! A flower seems to be a great thing to aspire to be :)

[Mirna]

thank you:) xx

[Daydreamer]

HAHAHA awww, loove what this turned out to be!💖

[Mirna]

hahha thank you :) xxxx

[shawnt5604]

Thought this was a fun read! I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

[Mirna]

thank you !! :D

[WritersRankings]

The poem is perhaps more refined than you believe. I find you have the natural symmetry of the poetic flower already.

[Mirna]

haha aw thank you!! xx ya I'm never that confident in anything I write anyway.

[Stephen]

Umm... to be honest, I don`t find anything childish in this write but yeah, found much emotions. I like this poem ..it`s simply a free-verse but I still finding some rhymes throughout the whole poem indeed. The peace of life`s "Nature`s my metaphor" .. lovely, beautiful .. what a beautiful write! I simply loved reading this beautiful poem .. it refreshes my mind. I`d look forward to reading your stuffs!

[Mirna]

aw thank you:) i really appreciate it :)xx

[MAC]

I find it to be purely poetic...nicely written!

[Mirna]

thank you:)xx

[StrixNebulosa]

I find it sounds like a soul... the soul of the very flower it admires so...

[Mirna]

thank you for reading:) i appreciate it xx

[Sourav]

Very interesting... enjoyed it!

[Mirna]

thank you for the comment :) x

[ANM]

We are here to write and that is what you do very well!

[Mirna]

aw thank you :)xx

[ANM]

You are very welcome!

[Jen Yarrington]

Not random or childish at all. You can write about whatever inspires you!

[Mirna]

thank you