FOUR

Call warning out in vain,

Like fire breathing air,

Remember the creation,

Hell’s screaming choir.

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Bones cutting through the flesh,

Dead, rendered unaware,

Walk with the ultimate truth,

She will come for you.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

This is really good. I can get so many personal interpretations out of this piece. That's what I like about writing, people are able to even create new interpretations to someones writing. I really like this. Although this wasn't written to me or for me I can absorb your work and take it in, in my own way. Well done.

[Sami Khalil]

A nice write...I guess I'm the first to review this one...:)

[Irma Chavez]

what do you like about it?

[Sami Khalil]

I like the powerful message that people who are lost and calling in vain now are seeing the truth or finding it and saving thier souls from hell fire. That is what I get out of it...

[Sami Khalil]

Although I'm not a christian ( with all do respect ) but I think four refers to the four gospels if I'm not mistaken.