Running

They don't have songs as an option so poem will have to do.

Eclipies of candle light dancing in tune

Stars always shining under the moon

A ring of the bell

Daytimes farewell

 

She will come running

Following my yell

 

The times old spirit

Toucher he knows well

The mist on the sea

Suns life fire's spell

 

He will come running

Running as well

 

At the end of all hope

You will find a rainbow

For they will come running

running with help

 

My hope comes running

Running to help

Author's Note

Odd

Reviews

[Bella-Marie]

The first time I read it, I was hit with the usual emotions - amazement, awe, etc.
The second time, I found some of the mistakes. And because I am such a meanie I shall point them out.
*fairwell - farewell
*Weel - Well
Unless that was actually supposed to be there. Then, I'm sorry!
But a really good poem, and if it's supposed to be a song, sing it to me after break!!!