Slow Like Liquid

A Poem by Doug

Pour onto me

Slow like liquid.

In the corners and cracks

Of my body.

Let me feel you.

Wash the outside world

Off me with you.

Cleanse me with you.

Drown me with you.

© 2008 Doug

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Kara Emily Krantz

damn son. this is gorgeous. i think i like i like i like your work :)

the simplicity of it is probably my favorite part. in few words you convey an entire universe.
fantastic piece :)

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on April 4, 2008

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Doug

Sacramento, CA

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One night while I was asleep I had the words, "Veni, Vidi, Vici" repeating in my head. All night this happened. I want to somehow use this creatively. I feel like it was a sign to use it for some s.. more..