Loser

 

 

 

I sit alone at a cafeteria table,

I feel the glares of others stare upon my face,

I am failing all my classes,

I have repeated the same grade more than once,

my father is an alcoholic,

my mother is a drug addict,

my brothers beat me,

I have no friends,

no one loves me,

everybody hates me,

it’s been like this for as long as I can remember,

and I hate it,

because there’s nothing that I can do about it,

my parents are beyond my control,

this whole world is against me,

I am losing at my own game,

I am a failure at life,

a loser.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

no one is a loser Amy..this is life..the long journey..every step you take..every thing that you say..
my father is an alcoholic,
my mother is a drug addict,
my brothers beat me,
I have no friends,
no one loves me,
everybody hates me,
these are experiences of life,if you do not have them ,you are not alive..whats more and do not be surprised..
i like failiures,i like losers,these are more lively than the perfect guy,i have always said it..a derelict ,with tattered clothes,ugly face..no one would look at..everyone would stay away..if you come close you will see flaming emotions,soul of gold,so pure heart,if you look for life its here not in Mr perfect guy..
i loved this write ..well done Amy

[Michelle Lea]

Hey Amy! You just reviewed mine so I'm reviewing yours LOL girl I write from my heart and
mostly about things happening in my life so I can relate to that. The writing helps me to get
it all out and thats how I deal with all the drama going on and some people can't stand reading
some of my writing, oh well they can just deal with it because most people that has read my
writings and have given me some really awesome reviews just like you!! Amy this poem is
awesomely written and the words brought tears to my eyes. Keep writing about what ever
pleases your hearts desires.!!

[J.Black]

K so, you are the best!