Learn To Be Still

Learn To Be Still

A Poem by Amy

 

 

 

I can’t stand waiting,

its seems like forever,

when it has only been a day.

 

I can’t stand losing,

it seems like I always do,

when you win my heart every time.

 

I can’t stand being apart from you,

because I miss your sweet smile,

it is the every lasting warmth that I long for.

 

I can’t stand hiding,

you haven’t got a clue in the world,

yet my body is screaming for you inside.

 

I can’t stand being invisible,

I want to shine,

and be the light that brightens up your life.

 

My patience is wearing thin,

but deep inside I know how you feel,

and for all of this I will learn to be still.

© 2008 Amy


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Wow ,Amy..another good write
I can't stand losing,
it seems like I always do,
when you win my heart every time...ok then i would like you always to be a loser ha ha
I can't stand hiding,
you haven't got a clue in the world,
yet my body is screaming for you inside...Where do you bring these thoughts
I can't stand being invisible,
I want to shine,
and be the light that brightens up your life.
oh ..what love is that..
wonderful write..




Posted 17 Years Ago


AW AMY! This is so cute, only if cough, you know who could actually see this, lmao! Aw. This was well done.

Posted 17 Years Ago


*smiles*

I am a newlywed, and my husband is stationed in Iraq. Your words are very near to my heart. I know these feeling well :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Hello, my name is Amy. 22 years old. I'm a strong, independent, free thinking person. I don't have to see the world through the same eyes as everybody else. I have my own opinions. I can use my .. more..