Jump

I don’t care about you,

I already hate her,

screw them too,

yeah I’m disturbed.

I’m standing on this bridge,

trying to win this fight,

I’m losing a battle against myself,

I can no longer decipher the difference between wrong and right.

So I jump.

I feel so light in the air,

I feel the rush of the gravity pulling me in,

It’s faster than I expected,

my body crashes into the water,

f**k - I can’t swim.

I feel myself going under,

the light in here is so dim,

the current polls me in deeper,

my oxygen supply wears thin.

My vision is blurred,

I see nothing but black,

I feel my heart begin to palpitate,

my body is under attack.

Everything is so quiet,

I hear nothing but the screams of the years,

the heartache and pain,

the fear I no longer have,

the nights of silent tears.

I guess I can’t turn back now,

so I close my eyes and let them take me,

my body burns inside,

hopefully they’ll find me soon.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

wow this is really nice..oh these moments when one decides just to finish it ..its never easy but the way you say it ..its really wonderful
My vision is blurred,I see nothing but black,heart begin to palpitate,my body is under attack.Everything is so quiet,I hear nothing but the screams of the years
the heartache and pain..the nights of silent tears..so I close my eyes and let them take me..
this is told beautifully ..i really loved this
wonderful..

[Country Girl]

Full of emtions. Well written!

[ANNA]

Sooooo veryyy movinggg...Ahhh, for a min there I thought i was in the water with you!
The emotion of your words went so well with the title to.
Of course I thought this was going to be something else then what you have here but that just means that you surprised me. Which can't happen a lot
Very well written Amy! Proud of this piece...yes your a awesome writer

Much love n hugs
Anna banana ;)