Growing Up

we're dizzy and young

we're just having fun

we're soaking up sun

so naive and dumb

we're climbing up trees

we're feeling the breeze 

we're scraping our knees

we do what we please

we're staying up late

we're feeling so great

we're set to create

And make our mistakes

we're having a blast

we're making us laugh

we're spinning 'round fast

we thought it would last

The memories we made

That time slipped away

Just woke up one day

Older and afraid

Reviews

[emipoemi]

I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! Well done! Last line is brilliant!

[soliloquy]

This is good. I was surprised at how this kept my attention and i wanted it to continue!

[Nix]

Loved this piece. It's quietly profound and brings back many a good memory. A very emotional poem and very well done.

[A. Wrin]

Thanks for taking the time to read it :) Your review's appreciated