For Sure, it's the Shore!

^.^ Me being goofy and hyper.... :-S Beware.

While I was down by the shore,

Getting ready for a chance to explore,

I suddenly realized I'd been there before.

Yes, I'm sure, on this exact shore!

It was quite a lure, and I wanted to see more,

But I was particularly unsure

Of which PART of the shore

I wanted to see, and why for.

But for you, I assure,

I will explore.

^.^ Yes, I will explore,

For sure, for sure!

Author's Note

This is the result of too much sugar and a very over-stressed day.... One finally snaps and becomes a nerd. Of course, if you were already PREVIOUSLY a nerd, this condition is only worsened further......for sure!! :P

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

It is a very good poem. Made me laugh. Photo made words come alive. Thank you.
Coyote

[Warrick]

Adorable. Having the picture to go with the piece really puts you there. I always feel like that when I visit the beach. But there are just soooo many spots to revisit! D:

[Angel Veselinov]

Hey great write. When i red it i tough that the best name for this is Deja Vu :) This write really gives me a feeling like you get deja vu at the shore. :) Really nice i am looking forward to read some of your stories and book :)

P.S. Not only good looks but great writing what a profound combination :)

[Thomas B. Buckman]

I really really like this. It is short, and sweet. Beautiful.

[Cyndi Jannise]

This was so cute i loved it!

[Forbidden]

Lol it was quite interesting... hahaha in an odd sort of way... but I think it may be just be me, lol

[Tony]

I love the play on words here and the humor was great. I feel a free spirit sort of person as I read this. I think the dog put an extra spin on this. Glad I stopped by to read your work.

Antony

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Lots of sure and shore references here not sure whether to take this poem with a pinch of salt or a bucket at least it had rythum and i can see you smiling when you composed it quite corny but imaginative nethertheless i'll give you 7/10 for effort.

[Michael X]

hahaha, nice, colorful, whimsical, like honestly feels like a day at the beach, in all subtlety youve captured
fun and free spirited nature, i enjoyed the zest, the appeal, transporting and cute, talented

[Jamie White]

haha Cute (: Nice read.