Sweet

The dark side of me..

Stab me with all you got
I aint scared of your trap
I tasted my own blood
It's sweeter than the sweetest wine.

 

You think you deserved me?
I think you f****n' sick
Hate me with all your guts
I'm sick of your big mouth

 

S**t, Im not your w***e!
I wish I could kill you
I'd stab you with the smile on my face.
And see you die in a pool of blood

 

[2005-08-28]

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

It's great way of expressing hate and revolt.

Te fact that you claim you suffering as being ,, sweet ,, denotes you welcoming the change into evil, witch is the most effective part of the poem.

A.M.

[David M Pitchford]

Seems to be an epidemic in the Western world of people running around burdened with unexamined issues of aggression, anger, and resentment. Most of this, I think, stems from our penchant for denial and a fear of honest expression. I'm happy to report you symptom-free! Well-examined and articulated aggression. The great thing about a lover who's this outspoken is that you know precisely where the boundaries lie, and you need not worry about a knife in the back - an icepick in the eye, but no knife in the back . . .
Thanks for sharing. Remind me to stay on your good side ;-)

[Michael X]

This is riveting well written and intensity defining a relationship in downward spiraling motion
powerful wording cuts straight to the heart.. what i enjoyed most was the precise wording..
paints a powerful imame of subjugated emotions burning.. a heart on fire.. rereading
i could get a sense of the honesty imposed bare-you have talent keep up the good work

S**t, Im not your w***e!
I wish I could kill you
I'd stab you with the smile on my face.
And see you die in a pool of blood