Push You Away

you look at me like there is something to me
something special, not evil and not dark
i can't push you away for that
i can't push you away for any reason at all
i could try and find at least one
to keep in the back of my mind
i would use it when i became to afraid
and even then it would be so hard
it will take more than fear to hurt you
hurting you is the same as hurting me
you've hurt rnough for the both of us,
and i think that will do.

Reviews

[WordMaster]

Interesting structure to this poem

I liked the story line a great deal, but the rhythm was off for me, it didn't flow the way it should for this topic

However, you certainly captured the feelings of the moment

Keep writing!