3 hours cheating ecstasy

a thought on two encounters with one man - the first and the last, many months apart

i never told you it was you who took that badge from me

who seduced me with triphop//and//graffitied//backdrop

who purred and nuzzled until i gave in

who didn't understand my self conciousness

who understood how to make it go away

who wrote and regretted

and always regrets

not seeing how it could have been

i remember the field and the smell of blackcurrants

present on your skin and breath

we rolled each other in an unpleasantly raw way

you asked me not to blow your mind

i thought what the hell

and you say you've never forgotten me

i understand

Author's Note

the // symbol is used to indicate a stacatto - I write like this to remind myself as this is a piece for performance to a guitar track

Reviews

[Alex Vidmar]

I really like this, very well written, and I can easily see this put to a guitar track! Very well done! Keep it up!

Peace.