Pale Sunlight

Of losing yourself.

In the pale sunlight,

the colors yellow, blue and pink seemed somehow

too bright.

I never wanted to change.

I only wanted to stay, in that safe place.

I don't want to be here,

where everything is new and scary.

But, the road to authenticity is paved with

rocks.

Stumble, trip...but I will find me there.

Waiting, the one who will always love me

and never leave.

My "self" simmering in the pale sunlight.

 

Reviews

[Chelsea Elizabeth]

Very nice. I love the emotion behind this and the imagery used to convey it.

[little.red.train]

lovely piece of self-discovery
the description is fantastic
hope to read more
xxx

[E. Rains]

I love this work... you have a way of making simple words have a great impact...Grand!

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Ah yes, the journey to self-discovery. It didn't specify whether it was sunrise or sunset, but I like to believe that it was the pale light of sunrise ... of new beginning. Your description is simple and vivid, and that is a wonderful combination.

I enjoyed very much.

[deeps]

The one thing you can never so is to out run yourself, this is wonderful