Glimpse of Expert Interview #1

Question and answer session

Interviewer- They say you cannot write in a well polished impressive language, you are just unlike an ordinary writer?

 

Author- Well is it so? Thank you, I am honored for such critics who really take some time to read my work and glad to hear from them. My target is not to achieve the readers who like to jot down polished stuff to make readers read and love them, but my target is people from all age groups, all categories who are geniuses in their own way and are able to conceive and understand the power of simple words to connect me. Yes, I choose simple language and do pick suitable new words for those who like to adapt and preach them in their daily routine. I am here to contribute my work and motivate myself to pen down something more better each time, learn from people from all walks of life, share my knowledge that I have acquired over years and intent to perceive and share them ahead.

Author's Note

The above write up is what I strongly believe in and hence have tried to jot it down. Please share your views, it will be very helpful for me. Thanks.

Reviews

[Robert]

I really like your thoughts here. I feel similar on some points. When I write, I write what I feel in that moment of time, it is from my heart. Sometimes when someone reads my writings they dont understand. But sometimes i dont think the reader needs to understand everything about the poem. Each word doesn't need to be deciphered. I truly like my work to be reviewed though, that way I can try to improve.

[Mitali Shah]

Exactly Robert. I feel the same as well. Keep writing more :)

[613]

Although there are a bunch of punctuational errors here, I completely agree with you! Haha.

- Brittney

P.S. If you wouldn't mind, I would love it if you could please review my work. I'm trying to get one step closer to publishing; but can't do that without your help!

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Britney. Please feel free to point out errors. They really help me.

Will surely review your work soon :)

[613]

Thanks! (:

There's a mistake in nearly every line. You put too many commas & don't end sentences at the appropriate time. Most of the paragraph you wrote was one huge block because the commas just kept on coming. Haha. If you use a semi-colon or break it up with a period or two, it would reach much more fluently!

[613]

*read much more fluently

[Mitali Shah]

Surely will work out on this dear and will avoid to drag the lines. Thanks

[613]

You're welcome. Glad I could help! (: