The Departure

Encountering break up

In the heavy rains

both poured their pains

Waving their silent goodbyes

hoping to feel again the reprise

Letting the distances take on

they now decide to move on

With hands feeling the touch for the last time

those who never skipped any sublime.....

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write... love the emotions behind the words. Break-ups are never fun but what else can we do? Good work :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Aaron :)

[Saddam]

With hands feeling the touch for the last time
those who never skipped any sublime.....

Ah remind me something.
It is most painful having no words, I know.
Express well dear and it is true.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Saddam

[marcus]

A poignant picture of .. separation ...will it be forever?

[Mitali Shah]

Yep Marcus

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a a lot in the short poetry. Left reader with the need to know and understand more. Any goodbye is sadness and heartbreak. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Rajat malik]

So short and so much emotions.... #Loved it

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Rajat

[Robert]

Very touching piece you have penned Mitali. Expressed well the sad feelings you have.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Robert for appreciating. God Bless :)

[wordman]

break up`s it can bring out the rain and the pain

[Mitali Shah]

Very well said wordman. Thanks for describing. God Bless :)

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Great flowing write,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks James for appreciating. God Bless :)