Luscious Craving

An experiment describing my love for choclates

Dark is her color

But sweet she is

 

Sweetness of her body

Is an irresistible pleasure

 

The tenderness of her skin

Feels like velvet paint on wall,

 

She serves me the best

During all my mood swings

 

I wish her to serve me

Till my heart pumps its last

 

 

Reviews

[Vishal Suthar]

What if someone doesn't go thoroughly, he will probably think of Girl excluding your last four lines...
Great ..

[Mitali Shah]

lolzz thanks Vishal

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Chocolate is tasty. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Robert]

This is a very sensual piece you have penned Mitali. Speaking of chocolate or maybe sometimes else.....?

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks dear, good one Robert. Perception differs you can perceive as you feel dear ;) no harm

[Saddam]

Lets me a bite, that dark and sweet things for once.
It is lovely write, short yet perfect.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Saddam :)

[Chirag Kumar]

"She serves me the best During all my mood swings" A wonderful male perspective presented by you. Lovely :)

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Chirag :)

[Arjun Singh]

Nice going Mitali!
Short, yet conveys your intended meaning nd mssg

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you Arjun for appreciating :)

[mattavelli]

That is sexy chocolate, Mitali.
I like the dark bitter chocolate. It shocks my tongue.

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Matt. :)

[AaronFreitas]

You definitely made me crave some chocolate Mitali! Good work!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you Aaron :)

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
I could definitely feel the love of
chocolate in this delicious piece:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much James :)