Hope

Hope is what keeps you giong

Cursed city

Barren land

No grains

Only pains

No rains

Dark day

Lightning clouds

Thundering sky 

Winds blew

Poured blessings

Seeds grew

Bore fruits

Barren face 

Turned happy

Curse free

More rains

No more pains

Only gains...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice journey to good ending.
"More rains
No more pains
Only gains..."
Rain, a blessing and a curse. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Robert]

This seems a little different than I am use to your writing. It is fresh, clear, and simple piece.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Robert :)

[SonOfaSailor]

Nice, I like the simple set up and rhyme scheme. It bring up some nice images and flows

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you dear

[KWP]

I love this ... yes yes this is great I love the style ... I did a poem in this style ... i think it gives you little snippets before it quickly moves onto another scene and yet it tells the reader a story in the process ... and in these words right here you have given us the circle of life .. very nice ...

PS where in Mumbai are you from .. X

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much KWP for appreciating. It means a lot :) God bless

[ANTO]

Famine turned to feast.
"Poured blessings' - what a great line
'Curse free' - it amazing how rationale is jettisoned at times of crisis.
The relief at the rainfall is tangible here.

[Mitali Shah]

Very well perceived ANTO. Thanks for reading :) God bless

[Jamestown]

Hope is a perfect title for this well written piece of work!
Great flow and graceful wording:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much James :)