Moment Frozen

Coming back after departure. Love always finds it way back if its meant for you.

Eyes swollen

Grudges broken

Love woken

Words Unspoken...

Reviews

[raj24]

Lots of things remained unsaid between the lines and in the lines that were not shared. Really liked it.

Raj

[Illumina]

It's small but reading it gives a nice feeling. The words are deep. I really liked it.

[Arjun Singh]

Grudges broken
Words Unspoken...
Gd lines, nd commendable creativity...

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Arjun :)

[wordman]

sounds like a good fight going on

[Mitali Shah]

hehe sort of dear ;)

[sunprincess]

........love this, so much said in so few words...to keep love alive in friendship, I feel communication is the key ★

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks for the appreciation sunprincess :)

[sunprincess]

...........most welcome :) ★

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Words Unspoken & the Moment Frozen.......Beautiful lines!

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Skyfall :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

welcome friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of words. Create place and situation. Create vision of sadness and silence. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[wordman]

you paint a picture of pain ,a great write

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Wordman

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Robert]

You are really putting pen to paper lately Mitali. I know heartache will do that makes poems or songs some of the best when they come from the heart.

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you Robert for your kind appreciation :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A piece that in a few short lines paints a picture of grief and loss at the end of a relationship by its pace and structure and word choice.

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much John for your appreciation :)