Lovestory

Two souls
One warm
Other cold
Eyes meet
Opposites attract
Hearts illuminate
Chemistry strikes
Sense passion
Unite together
Till eternity

Reviews

[Tomoe Tellez]

Oh my gosh, I love how even though you only used two words per line, you told a whole story with strong words.

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Alondra for the appreciation :)

[Coyote Poetry]

When chemistry strike. It is over.
"Chemistry strikes
Sense passion
Unite together
Till eternity"
Nice flow of words led to the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Shivai]

Pretty words
Deep meanings
Tell stories
Intrigue Readers

I fell in love with your writing

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Shivai

[Rajat malik]

A sweet poem Mitali....trying to capture the meeting of opposite sex.....

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Rajat

[wordman]

two souls searching in the night,beautiful concept

[Mitali Shah]

Thanks Wordman

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Robert]

So true on opposites attract.I always believe in love and eternity if that love is true. Beautiful poem Mitali.

[Mitali Shah]

Completely agree with your Robert.

[ANTO]

. Each couplet a story in itself and the whole is the ultimate in romantic brevity here Mitali.
Very enjoyable (but rare??) tale of success in love
Love the imagery of the hearts illuminated by the chemistry between them - a sublime short.
:)

[Mitali Shah]

Thank you so much ANTO