you and me

when i am going to sleep
want to press close you in an embrace
but you bothered

may be you don't know
i don't want to see dream
lonely

when i am going to walk in the park
want to walk hand in hand
but you feel disturbed

may be you don't know
i don't want to lost you
even in a single time

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. True love is when we want our love to be content at all times. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tori Hughes]

very nice, but it feels kinda unfishished.

[JiDonnelly]

One thing this piece lacks and that is credit.
Short but simply beautiful.

Well done, Big ups.

-JiDonnelly'