love me

A man was shivering with cold
wrapping up a tear bed cover
in a road

Many peoples are passing the path
They are dressy

But the man was shivering with cold

I am that man
Lovely girl
Please love me
and embrace me with kiss
I am going to die with cold

Reviews

[Tarry Franck]

I agree with DrD - you are their voice. Well done my friend!

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Lover Of Words]

Nice

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Valentine]

Too many times in life we do not see the need in aother people as we are to selfish and think only of ourselves..Valentine

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[DrD]

I like how you are always the voice of the downtrodden and afflicted. I deeply respect that and admire your works. This is no less and it struck home with me. Very well done.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx DrD

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

So many times those of us without material pleasures only want to be loved. With love our soul is warmed and we are happy regardless of our circumstances. I have had everything and no one to love and I have had nothing and had someone to love. I prefer the love with nothing. Beautiful write Dupur

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A lovely poem this a sad slant on class and the haves and have nots

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[KAOlmsted]

Very good. Thank you for sharing this with us.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx u also

[Shy Girl]

Wow!! Could feel the isolation of his soul and the lonliness of his heart. :)

[Dupur Mitra]

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[Tate Morgan]

Reminded me of my feeling when I was divorced abandoned on the road

[Dupur Mitra]

oh sorry thnx

[Tate Morgan]

Its fine i write on those things and many more.I am happily married and much the better thank you I personally think bad times make for better poetry

[Becky C Strukamp]

Wanting shelter from a storm of cold..a desire for a warm embrance. Nice poem.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx