love-3

If i start begging,
If i start a song,
shall i get love?
can i play along?

If i start driving without destination,
If i see you in a rail station,
will you talk with me,
having a cup of tea?

I don't know,
i have no trust.
I am flying at the air,
like my emotion is covered with dust.

Reviews

[Vanesa Markovic]

What I appreciate in your work is that it is clear English is not your first language, yet despite that, you can completely convey the message intended.

[InsanityWriter]

Nicely done. It flowed well, and the imagery was very good. :)

[KAOlmsted]

This is quite possibly my favorite piece by you. Very well done.

[Renée]

nicely done..love can be like that..wondering do they feel the same...

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good questions in the poem. Sometime we must stop and regain our mind. Good things can find us. I enjoyed the thoughts in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Lot of frustration and longing in this read....love hits us when we least expect it, not something we can really go looking for, although I'm sure some have found it over a cup of tea or in a rail station. Nice one.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Leslie Philibert]

Another good one - simple yet in its effect complicated, good work.

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Valentine]

It seems to me just when a person starts to give up on love..then it finds them in the most unexpected plase..good luck hunting for that special someone..Katihe

[Dupur Mitra]

thnx

[Valentine]

Are you always so long at answers that it takes us hours to reAd them??????

[Baby Ricochet]

You can always buy "love" for an hour.

[Dupur Mitra]

ha ha ha ok