This River

Floating quietly down this river

River of hopes and dream

You sit silently 

Awaitng for someone to come along 

To float alongside you

The talks at night

Kisses in the morning 

But your love down this river

Is all I need

Three words I have waited my whole life

To say to someone 

For them to say it too

For them to say I love you too

We float gently down this path 

of love and hope

Waiting for the one

The one for you

and one for me

Till then I float alone

humming along to the flow

The rivers flow of love and harmony

Hum along if you can

Because I will too

Hum of love and peace

Hope and the future

Floating down and away 

Humming a song

I will wait 

For you and... me

Reviews

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

This is great, I loved it

[Marie Kinnett]

Thank you :)

[Kane Hagwood]

This poem has the tune of love-sickness and hope wrapped together in a peaceful, flowing bundle. It's relatable to yearn for someone to float down the metaphorical river with. Someone to hold. To love. To play. I don't know of anyone who *doesn't* want a connection like that. But this piece has the right attitude about it. It gives this sense of staying positive and uplifted by ones own spirit as they travel along for a time, hoping and keeping faith they'll bump into someone significant later down the current.

This is well written and very much enjoyed. :)
-Kane

[Marie Kinnett]

Thank you, that means a lot