Crush, Help Final Part

Crush, Help Final Part

A Story by Marie Kinnett

I'm so happy.

He said yes. 

so let me start from the beginning. We all were at the breakfast table, talking. Me and Elli had gone to get breakfast and got back when Ethan was showing their car key. We sat down and Ethan gave me the key, which at that moment I didn't know it was one of the zappy ones. I was sitting and that thing hurt so bad but is was also funny. I was sitting next to him but I was talking to Elli when I noticed he kept looking at me so I would make eye contact and we would start laughing. After a while of doing that, I asked if he had something to say and all he said was yes. So confused, I said yes to what.  He looked so nervous that I starred to smile. He said yes to your uhm proposition, which I started laughing bc of the wording. I said thanks for answering me. We sat there being awkward for a while till the bell rang. I got up and threw my trash away but stopped him when he went to leave. I grabbed him by his shoulders and gave him a hug.  He said see you later. 

Me and Elli walked to class talking about what happened. Later I saw him in the hallway going to class. I gave him a tiny wave bc I was walking with my friend and he sent one back. This is the end and thanks for all the support on the way 

© 2026 Marie Kinnett


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Added on February 19, 2026
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Marie Kinnett
Marie Kinnett

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Hi, I'm sixteen. I"m a girl. I love reading, writing, and crocheting. I spend my free time hanging out with my friends and family. Oldest of seven, and love them all. Like to read comments to improve .. more..