Dreaming

Trepidation flight

Dreaming souls abound at night

Glorious vision sight

 

Eyes without a face

Lost thoughts roam the minds old place

Stagnant bitter taste

 

Naked in a crowd

Sights and sounds explode too loud

Comfort in nights shroud

 

Written by: Mark Lamont

July 2007

Reviews

[Little Mouse]

What is a haiku? Haha! I know you'll get my joke. Yes, yes, I know, something about the number of words. Whatever. Oh, sigh. So my muse, I can't wait to write some dreams! I hope you write about a dream soon! I know you remember them, many don't!

[Ashentara]

Great haiku, I love the words, you can tell that they were carefully chosen, and rightly so!!
The imagery you conjure up is vivid and very thought-provoking. Nice job really!!!