Now Us

 

 

You drew me in

Outlined and highlighted

And filled me in with color

 

You led me in

I followed your path

And stepped softly in your foot print

 

You showed me a way

One that I needed

And I forged without a map

 

I pulled you in

And reflected a new light

You squinted into the brightness

 

I stood next to you

And we walked together

In our own way but as one

 

Created by what we followed

Created by what was reflected

We created us

 

Written by: Mark Lamont

August 2008

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Created by what we followed
Created by what was reflected
We created us

This is great stuff!

[Little Mouse]

Lovely piece to come back with...I enjoyed this Mark! -:3 )~~~

p.s. - Did you plan to repeat title at start? Could stand/flow w/out it! : )

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Very nice and sweet, your words flow nice and gently across the page.
Thanks for entering in my contest and the best of luck to you.

[allwrite]

I agree with Cat. Absolutely stunning!

"I stood next to you
And we walked together
In our own way but as one"

Absolutely loved by me.
AW

[Celtic Cat]

Wow........ this is stunning!! So so so so great!!! Now I don't feel so bad for asking you to "post" it! lol I got two for the price of one!! woohoo!!! And both were equally worthy of every penny spent!!!
love love love this piece.

[bobby]

I like!!!