Bitter

A Poem by Mai L Nissen

Lemony bitter

Sugar to silence the hurt

Bitter Lemonade

28th of August 2015

© 2015 Mai L Nissen

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jacob erin-cilberto

absorbing the sugar of life doesn't necessarily get rid of the pain...makes it less bitter as a quick fix...but that bitter lemonade taste finds its way back.

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10 Years Ago

exactly! Thank you for sharing your thoughts :)

10 Years Ago

enjoy your writings, Mai....

when you have some spare time, visit my page if you have.. read more

10 Years Ago

Will do! I like your writings :)

Coyote Poetry

You said a handful in the short poem. When sweetness turn sour. Hard to find the sweet taste of hope. Thank you Mai for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words! I am quite amazed at how you manage to read and review so many things.. read more

10 Years Ago

Hard to do. Writing and reading is my last pleasure and you are welcome.

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Added on August 28, 2015
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Author

Mai L Nissen

Odense, Region Syddanmark, Denmark

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I am 30 years old, a graduate student from Denmark, studying English (literature, history, linguistics) and Scientific Study of Religion. If you wish to befriend me, I would like you to read some .. more..