Bottom of Society

Low expectation

Lower participation

Lasting poverty

Author's Note

Criticism is well received

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful use of words. You told the lasting truth. Thank you Mai for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel this could be attributed more to the poverty of the heart---

we expect pain, so we refrain, and become poor in emotional gain.

j.

[H]

I like the brevity, very nice.