We are nature

Please do not misunderstand when I say” foolishness.” It is simply said to stop the flow, in order to grasp my point, of what is to follow.

 

We stand in awe of the mountains,

the sea births serenity,

we honor the earth and what it bears,

look to it, to feel free.

 

Ah, foolishness! We miss the point.

It’s part of you and me.

From the nature is whence we came,

thus nature sets us free.

 

Lose not the point that pushes us,

that makes us crave this earth.

We are a part of all we crave,

Immerse yourself in worth.

 

Of the mountain peaks we are part,

of the sea so are we,

of evergreens and old oak trees,

earth's vessels walking free.

 

So surround yourself in nature,

the waters of your soul.

Submerse yourself, with who we are,

a part of nature,  whole.

 

~Melody

Reviews

[Clockwork]

For we are a drop in the eternal ocean of energy, yet we are never alone in this world. We are all things and all things are part of our spirit. One can not live a part from the whole unless he is a splinter from the branch of the great tree of life without the knowledge of his origin.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Wonderful, you picked an interesting topic already developed by so many poets but you did it your way ! You made it crystal clear without losing the poetry of such a thought, well done !

[MandaBear]

you have penned this in a beautiful manner. Keep writing.

[Eve]

A true and beautiful Melody , Melody :) One with nature, one within ourselves.

[Laura Maidah]

I like everything but the exclamations

[Wolfhilde]

This is beautiful written. Nature is who we are and were we belong to.

[MOON]

Love of nature, hear its song. Lovely write.

[caroline]

I can hear the rhythm of our souls and I love how this connects to the earth.

[marytownsend]

That longing for the pure, wild places dwells in us all I think. Nature does make her own music and sings her own song; her siren song pulls at our hearts pleading with us to hear. Beautiful poem!!

[Willowtree]

This is so beautifully written:) I'm a nature lover so I enjoyed this very much. Great poem!