I Love You..A Poem From My Daughter to Me....

This poem is from my daughter Victoria (aka) V.J.C. I will cherish this always as it is now written on the walls of my soul. I am more proud of her, than she will ever be of me!

I LOVE YOU

 

Life so fragile,

you make it worth the while.

The smile on your face,

brightens my day.

 

Never asking much,

Giving without a thought.

Did I ever tell you,

I love you?

 

Firm grasp,

Gently guiding.

Understanding beyond your years,

Wisdom of gold!

 

Did I ever tell you,

I Love You?

Carrying such heavy burdens,

No complaint pass your lips.

 

Embracing the nearness of you,

Emotions unfold.

Light you share,

In my darkest of hours.

 

I’m sorry for,

All the wrong things I have done.

Did I ever tell you,

I Love You!!!

 

Author's Note

I dedicated the song to my daughter Victoria, She is my butterfly! I love you and am so proud of you, no matter how high the mountain...you always reach the top!
I am so proud of who you have become Victoria!

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

Now THAT'S worth a whole bunch of love points from mom. It's wonderful when our children reach the point where they can thank us for our efforts, maybe while minimizing our own weaknesses and mistakes. Conveying love and appreciation is the finest use of communication or poetry.

[eglantine]

agreed--I wrote my mom a poem as well

[Dean Kuch®]

Just as her mother, your daughter unveils a beautiful and caring soul. This was angelic and alluring...

[Renée]

Thank you for sharing... Love is incredible

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I love this piece because of the emotions you have for your daughter. It is like a mother's instinct that I could never understand as a son, but it is a powerful love. Thank you for your read request :)

[lee von cleef]

Girls ,Girls, hold all they give,what a great way to end my evening,as I cruz to let my daughter drive me home.

[Sheila Kline]

Simply beautiful and written from the depths of her heart and soul!! You have every reason in the world to be so, so proud of her!!! She surely gets her poetic talent from her sweet mom! May you always share joy and happiest of moments together!!!

[Tate Morgan]

You will never hurt someone by loving them to death

[Jetta Zippora]

Beautiful. How sweet. Love this one. :)

[That_Girl]

Awwh this is tear worthy! I'm sure she is proud to have you as a mother. Very nice, Melody!

[afra]

awweeee so so sweet ...i wish my mom would love me too .....any way well done

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Sweet and touching! I enjoyed it. :)