Waters of Hope

Cool water covers me,

 I rest 'till submersion.

 My heart at peace,

 Within myself I now console.

Caressing me deep,

 To wash this world’s corrosion.

Purge me deep, ever flowing

 Waters make me whole.

 Flow from me,

Unforgotten mistakes.

Fresh air,

Filled with a new begotten hope.

Now rising from you,

 deep slow breaths I take.

Meditation,

 Cleansing spiritual soap.

 With life anew,

Each moment, I breathe deep.

To you I come,

 Cool water peace I keep.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[EMF]

An extremley musical poem, that would suit music as well as it suits the page. It flows beautifully with a marvelous theme. Can't help but leave you feeling... clean. A marvelous introduction to your work. Highly impressed at the way you manipulate the words with such skill and confidence

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am humbled by your review as well as all the reviews. Thank you so kindly.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you my kind friend

[Wondering Mind]

The elements, especially water, have a metaphysical energy that science will never, in its formulated ignorance, decipher.
This was a serene swim in your waters of hope. Lovely.

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LOVED IT!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

"Purge me deep waters make me whole" I loved this line, and I loved how you used water(symbol of calmness and purity) I love water and I loved your poem. so nice and well expressed

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you so much. I am working on how to get the music to play as soon as the poem is opened, yet to get it to work.

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Wow! I would love to read it after you are done with music, I saw the description above but, was not sure what music to play...It was really nice and looking forward for the upgraded version :)