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Purging fire

Purging fire

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney
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***FIRE***

"

Flaming feathers,

 uplift our hearts.

 Releasing,

 tainted fears in me.

Warmth,

 the coldest darkest parts.

Returning,

 blessing’s unto thee.

 

Sprit fire,

melt this scared soul.

Becoming liquid,

 purging trance.

Purified as gold,

restored, whole.

Beckoning flames,

 with you I dance.

 

I fear not,

 the flame nor the pain.

I free myself,

 finally free.

Old worries, 

now washed and slain.

A purged soul,

 I now will be.

 

© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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Anyway you look at this, it is faultless. From the phraseology, to the flow, to the beat. Indeed, set to music it would be just as good. A superb poem, handled like a true professional

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kimberly "Melody" Carney

13 Years Ago

You are so very kind. Thank you ;)
It's never to late to be purged and freed. Beautiful write.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

13 Years Ago

Oh how truly spoken!
And like the Phoenix she will rise above all the hate and pain that tried to burn up her spirit. Oh a very empowering poem.

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Posted 13 Years Ago
brilliant and intense; liberating and extinguishing...

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

13 Years Ago

I am so very glad you enjoyed it;)
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Loved it! I adore the positive spirit in your work :)

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

13 Years Ago

You are always so very kind, Thank you! The darker the day, the easier it is to see the light…itâ.. read more

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

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