My Last Goodbye

Wrote this a couple of years back when I was always in dilemma.

Do tell me if you know what's wrong.

Do make me smile for one last time,

cause the emotion is killing me.

And these tears are hurting me.

I'm in tears now,

I don't know why.

Don't try to understand me,

for all I know, you don't care.

 

I could guarantee you that I'm shedding,

with all these pieces of paper I've been holding.

I'm faking those smiles all along.

Although it sounds common, mine's different.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Such a deeply compelling write that shows the complexity of each of us. We all suffer, but in some ways our suffering is all done alone. No one knows what we truly face. Powerful write!

[Ama May Cooper]

A piece of pure mental confusion. Admirable to display teh truth of our confusion.Great work loved it

[Cool Handless Luke]

Yeah I could definitely feel you in this one, could even feel my own feelings at some point - your way of putting it, well it just puts words to a portion of my own pain - past or present. Well done.

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

Very powerful. It describes what we've all been through, but were afraid to say. Thanks for sharing.

[Bruce]

very well done.

[..R.I.P..]

I could here your voice in this piece, it was very powerful and well expressed. Good job.