Sweet Soul

A poem for someone I've lost touch with on the computer, for whatever reason

Like a whisper you're not sure if you heard

 

she was here, and then gone,

 

a secret ray of sunshine in a world of gray

 

A fleeting glimpse of her voice is all I ever saw,

 

and yet such a difference she made

 

in my life.  A long-distance friendship,

 

she lifted me when I was down,

 

and I hope, in some small way, I returned

 

the favor.  Meeting truly nice people in this world

 

is all-too rare, and she was definitely that

 

So I'll just say goodbye, and say thank you

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Miss C.Elliot]

It was simple yet so much grounded,I have had such a friendship indeed,which ended up in the same bittersweet vibe as your poem.

[Michael Stevens]

Thank you!

[walkingman117]

I like the feel,
and how you ended the poem

[Michael Stevens]

Thank you very much.