Titanic Struggle!

The fight to remain afloat!

 

Locked in a winner-take-all battle to end all battles!

 

Struggling to keep my head above water, to stay positive

 

Some days I feel I'm on board the Titanic,

 

about to slam into the iceberg, and sink into

 

the icy depths, never to be heard from again;

 

a few of you are asking, and that's a bad thing how?

 

Other days I'm wired with some upbeat deals!

 

I do think my outlook is directly proportional

 

to how much sleep and caffeine I get! 

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

great!
touchy and thoughtful...waterfull( wonderfull)
thanks for sharing ^^

[Michael Stevens]

Thank you much!

[Great Aunt Astri]

You describe dread well. I think we all know that feeling at times. I wonder what you would do with the subject of optimism?

[Michael Stevens]

Thank you much!

[A. H. Pinley]

Some days I feel I'm on board the Titanic,

about to slam into the (a submerged)iceberg, and sink quickly to

(icy depths below) the waves, never to be heard from again;

[Michael Stevens]

Thanks for the advice; I'll make the changes.