Comment; Delete; Too Late!

Comment; Delete; Too Late!

A Poem by Michael Stevens
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Rereading a comment you left on someone else's work, before the magic of coffee kicked in!

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Came out of my stupor and read what I commented

 

on somebody else's work, and I must say, 'offensive'. 

 

What was I thinking?  I'll tell you what, I wasn't!

© 2013 Michael Stevens


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Y'know, so many times on here, I need to repress my English teacher persona who is bristling with frustration over all the disjointed and florid crap she reads here. But then I drag out the vapid persona of the clinging, cloying fan. Just to survive, man. The one time I really ripped someone, she came back to me with ridiculous excuses like "I never use spell check on first draft, only if I know it will be published!" So I ripped her again; she's claiming a degree in anthropology, then tells me she is still in secondary school, and that she has already been accepted into a creative writing school in the US. She kept sending me emails with more swiss cheese statements that I just ignored. I hate it when people come on here and promenade their fantasy self and make outrageous claims. But I do want to encourage folks to keep writing because if they truly study, revise and think about what they're doing, they will progress.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Michael Stevens

12 Years Ago

I do understand how it must be frustrating to people who know editing, but there are nice ways of sa.. read more
weren't constructive. hu?
Weren't nice, hu?
tisk tisk

Posted 12 Years Ago


Michael Stevens

12 Years Ago

Well, I didn't think it was so bad at the time...I wasn't mean or anything, but I was trying to be f.. read more
Marie

12 Years Ago

Poets are a serious and sensitive bunch...
Michael Stevens

12 Years Ago

Yes, some of them are.

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Michael Stevens
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I write for fun; I write comedy pieces and some dramatic stuff. I have no formal writing education, and I have a fear of being told I suck, and maybe I should give up on writing, and get a job makin.. more..