The Rage of the Daily War

Life

                                                        

Just a poem

Everyday is a struggle, every day is a fight;

 

A fight just to keep my head screwed on right

 

Doing its best to drag me down

 

Into a raging torrent of issues, the sound

 

Of panic ringing in my ears

 

Shouting out my doubts, screaming out my fears

 

A never ending parade of bad scenarios play over and over,

 

Driving me insane, forcing me to take cover

 

Like a bad dream, yet I'm wide awake

 

I should be running, but I can't make

 

My legs move, I'm frozen in this spot

 

Let's face it, a warrior I am not

 

I make excuses to explain things away

 

But deep inside, I know the truth, I have to say

 

It's the rage of the daily war

 

And I don't know if I can go on---can't take much more

 

 

                   

Reviews

[micky]

Wow this is a amazing piece.....i feel the pain and frustration....i love this piece
Stay strong
Well done:)

[Michael Stevens]

Thank you, and don't worry, I don't feel like this very often; I was just how I feel when I do--artistic licence?

[micky]

Im sorry are u asking me a question...or not

[Michael Stevens]

I'm sorry, I just meant that I took a semi-down state of mind to the limit.I exaggerated my feelings is all.

[micky]

Noo i love that u exaggerated your feeling...it created a amazing poem