Battle For My Very Thoughts

Battle For My Very Thoughts

A Poem by Michael Stevens
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Up or down?

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The Happy Thoughts Army is battling the Bummer Army

 

For control of my brain, and not just battling,

 

The fighting hand-to-hand, gouge-out-your-eyes,

 

Whatever-it-takes-to-win, desperate kind

 

The very fate of the world, or at least my mood,

 

Hangs in the balance, and I'm caught in the crossfire  

© 2015 Michael Stevens


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It's wonderful how you give your light and humorous touch to writings talking about something serious, adding amusing melodrama and in this case, action too! Here buddy, a bullet to the Bummer Army - *bang* *zap*

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael Stevens

10 Years Ago

Thanks much Rana, very appreciated; most of the time The Happy Thoughts Army wins, but every once in.. read more
Rana

10 Years Ago

Yeah totally, plus it's automated so don't you ever worry!
Michael Stevens

10 Years Ago

It's all good!
Well, I hope the Happy Thoughts Army wins...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael Stevens

10 Years Ago

Thanks Marie, and it usually does!

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Michael Stevens
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I write for fun; I write comedy pieces and some dramatic stuff. I have no formal writing education, and I have a fear of being told I suck, and maybe I should give up on writing, and get a job makin.. more..