Surprise!

What do you think!

                                              

                                                             

                        If you're expecting real poetry, this ain't it

                                       ******

 

Come on, just a couple more steps and 'pow!"

You hunting b*****d, you're a stealer of my dreams, and how.

 

You're a dick head who gets it all, it's everything your way,

and piss on everybody else--well, not today,

 

 Today is payback time, yes, you're so screwed.

With my revenge plan, I must say, I've been so shrewd!

 

You'll walk right into this, led on by your baser instincts.

You'll be marched around by your rinky-dink.

 

You've screwed with me for the last time--my girl, my job,

my hunting club membership, you shiny-red knob!

 

Wave to the babe as I blow you apart

with my trusty 12-gauge right to the heart.

 

You'll pay the ultimate price for thinking with your dick,

for what you believe is real, but is really just a fake chick,

 

fashioned out of wood, y'all, splintered relations.

 Feeling pellets tear into you will be your last sensation!

 

 

 

Reviews

[Marie]

I didn't get it at first. Then I saw he wass decoyed into a trap...

Maybe an analogy for omethingelse...

[Michael Stevens]

Yeah, it could be--thanks Marie!