Jagged Thoughts

I may sound like I'm whining, but I really am!

                                                       

Staggering around blindly, careening off memories.

Can't shut off my brain, can't stem the virtual flow

of crimson--I stare in disbelief as it splashes

in torrents--it is a wound of my own making

 

These jagged thoughts cut so deeply,

bringing the pain like a thousand knives.

Nothing seems to help, as I just keep on bleeding,

and question all the choices I ever made. 

Reviews

[Marie]

Put on some bandaids and stop thinking about the past. You can't change it, and you can't bleed it away.

[Michael Stevens]

True, good advice Marie!