Change

I hate it

Change is a shadow darkening my door
The unknown just waiting, biding its time
It's a hammer that shatters the illusion
That you have a say about anything

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

It sounds like you're reflecting on the fear of change in your poem. The idea that change is a shadow that darkens your door is a powerful one, and I think many people can relate to the feeling of uncertainty and apprehension that comes with the unknown. Your poem suggests that change is a force that is beyond our control, like a hammer that shatters our illusions of control. I think this is a powerful message, and it's one that many people can relate to. Overall, I enjoyed your poem and thought it was thought-provoking and insightful.

[Michael Stevens]

Thank you, BT