A Sad State of a Spoken Word

A Sad State of a Spoken Word

A Poem by monimenage
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I think that the word LOVE is thrown around so loosely, but this is what I came up with.

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Its become caricature
Of the amazing art it deserves to be
Like a washed up boxer
Punch drunk from the abuse it has taken And made to be the sacrificial journeymen
For its sex soaked, anger driven, drama laced, younger counterpart
Misappropriated to end friendships
Give birth to contempt
And make a woman feel like sex is a 4 letter word

L.O.V.E.

It is a mirage
Paraded in public to make you see what cannot be
And blinds you to the reality
That this once gave our words a voice
And has become a way to give our voice no words.

© 2012 monimenage


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Great write! You definitely hit the nail on the head with this one. I agree that "Love" does not seem to be taken as seriously as it once was. I was going to say the last two lines were my favorite with the idea of our voice having no words. It's a powerful concept, but honestly I very much enjoyed the whole piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beautifully written

Posted 13 Years Ago


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this is very true. and love isn't the only word which has lost meaning. look at the way words like genius and hero are tossed around. sad that perfectly wonderful and powerful words have come to this.

nice writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write! You definitely hit the nail on the head with this one. I agree that "Love" does not seem to be taken as seriously as it once was. I was going to say the last two lines were my favorite with the idea of our voice having no words. It's a powerful concept, but honestly I very much enjoyed the whole piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 28, 2012
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monimenage
monimenage

Fayetteville , NC



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I am a single mom, with 4 children & a grandson. Hell, if you want to add the ppl who call me mom...then its a whole lot more. I have become a source of security for some. All the while I hurt, with a.. more..