Patience

She has been alone for so long, standing her ground. waiting for her love to return to her side. Will she continue to wait or will she give in?

As the wind carressed her soft, porcelain skin, she remembered. She remembered the pain.
The pain that the world had put her through. The lives taken for an unreasonable cause.
The very source of her uneven surroundings. Simplicity was all she wanted of her life.
Alone and at peace, she wished to enter the world.

 The thoughts surprisingly brought a blush to her ever-so-pale cheeks because she
had been brought back to her  memory of that day at the beach. The wind was blowing
much like tonight and the beautiful love she experienced was unbearably sweet. The air
was frosty as if winter had come and his soft , curly brown hair was rushing between her
fingers. The sweet tender kiss of the night on her skin was comforting and protected as
she drifted into endless sleep.

 The flow of silky smoothness rubbed against her and caused her heart to pause.
That happy memory was her last. She still lays silently waiting for that love to come back.
She is patience, she is light, she is determination, and never shall she give way. She was
unlike the others that had left this place of neverness and fogotten the love they waited
for.
 
 They had gone as time passed. the were stubborness, Anger, fury, jealousy, but
most of all pain. As the breeze began to soften and the sun began to set her eyes opened
upon an approaching dark figure in the distance and a keen smile sweft across the stillness
of her face.

Author's Note

What do you think? it was a spur-of-the-moment thing so it just came out realy fast but I hope you enjoyed it.

Reviews

[sarcastic]

o well that was at the most bit of interesting
ily

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me of a dream. Sad and mysterious dream. Hold on to love and never let it go. My only advice. Follow your heart not your mind but make sure you think clearly.

[Allison]

Nice imagery. I could really visualize this in my head. The vocabulary was vivid and unique. "As the wind carressed her soft, porcelain skin, she remembered." Ah...love that.
Lovely
~Pokie

[♥(heatherawesome..]

wow awesomeeeeeeee

[Tate Morgan]

Some of our best comes from off the top of our heads

[chaotic katie]

i did enjoy it savy it was wonderful

[Mary]

wow haven't read that before! it was really good i'm getting kinda nervous "tara"!