Followers

Look alike,

you steal away.

You take my world,

and end my day.

You take my friends and take my clothes.

I wonder if I'll ever break out.

Trapped behind a smile that isn't my own,

listening to voices

 that I never heard before.

Trapped inside my brain going crazy from the whispers.

They torture me till I can take no more.

Look alike,

me enemy,

who is it you'd really be,

if you were not taking over me,

and using my innocent smile.

Reviews

[rockinmiley555]

i realy liked this one. it was very thorough at explaining what you ment. it would be better if it were just a little longer, but other than that, well done

[Subjective Sanity]

WOW! I really like this one. Well done!

[MusicJunkie66]

Yeah, being a follower isn't all that great, be as unique as you can. I loved the poem :]

[maryjaneuy]

love this one. i agree with mary. I do hate followers too. :|

[Tate Morgan]

Very nice try to find in yourself a purpose that no longer depends on the opinions of others

[chaotic katie]

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[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

lol thx Mar

[Mary]

i liked it, the first part was my favorite but all around this is one of my favorites of your work, i do hate followers and they are all around:)