Passing Notes

Dearest,

 

You always made me feel so great. Like I was weightless. I would've given anything to you. I would've given up a chance to fly with wings if it meant you had to stay on the ground. You were my everything. I never wanted anyone else. I never wanted anything but you to hold me in your arms. Forever to be held in your embrace. I told myself you loved me too. That you wanted me back. And you did, but I was different. I didn't seem to show you that I loved you too. So, you left me. We both still loved each other and we both missed one another. But, when I was willing you were with another. When you were wiling I was taken too. Now you say that you've found a new one. That you love her. That she is "the one". Exactly what you used to say about me. I am lost now. I felt, after that, that I would die. You could not have her. It couldn't be. But it was. I needed you I craved your touch on my skin again. I cried that night. I died in my soul. I new that soon the pain n my chest would throb till it exploded and I would die painlessly. at least I hoped. After all we'd been through you had someone else. I couldn't imagine such a thing. And now, to think that, with all we said we had felt. We never even kissed. Not even once. I think now that maybe we will never know if that love was real because we never felt a spark. Never even had the chance to feel a spark. Fireworks is what I had imagined. Beautiful fireworks. A midnight beach. A bonfire in the country. Romance. The purest of sorts. After all, we did love each other. And we... I think I still do. But my heart is not throbbing as loud any more and I think that it might be okay. Just as long as you stay a friend at least because I didn't lie when I said I needed you. And to think that we never even kissed. Not once. Not even a peck.

 

 

    -I still love you,

    Undefined

Author's Note

Please review. This goes slightly along with Eternal Magick(another writing of mine) I really hope you like it.

Reviews

[E. R. Rawding]

wow, it's full of emotion. i can definitely tell you poured your heart and soul into this. good job

[sarcastic]

ily idk wat to say it waz amazing it truely waz
ily

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is awesome

[Poetic Beauty]

This is sad and painful. I can feel your emotions completely. great job expressing your feelings.

[Mary]

it was good...well sav u know how i feel on this subject...he was a dick head and u wouldn't let me beat him up...so yeah:)

[deeps]

I like this, it's wonderful to express oneself soul this way.
Very well vented.

[chaotic katie]

loved it a lot

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

Thx and This really was a vent of feelings(you know to get out all my stuff and throw away the note kinda thing like on Oprah) haha but I read it again and it sounded poetic so I put in on here for a change in my styles.

[SarahCortland]

I really like it. It reminds me of things i've been through. I think the best thing in writing is when you can visually see or feel the feeling it presents It's really great!